Ode to A Beautiful Lady
Beautiful hair she has,
Like the gentle waves of a silent Ocean,
It dances with the air!
Beautiful eyes she has,
Like a mystic brown Universe,
It sparkles with depth!
Beautiful lips she has,
Like the alluring soft bed of Clouds,
Touching it remains a longing desire!
Beautiful voice she has,
Like the eternal sea-sound from a Conch shell,
Makes my life serene!
Beautiful stories she has,
The Princess of a fairy tale,
Waiting for the Prince!
Beautiful face she has,
The very thought of it,
Gives my heart a thousand Flares!
Beautiful hands she has,
Like the lonely Moon to a dark Sky,
A diamond ring on the left can make it bright!
Beautiful Lady that she was,
Now remains in the dreams of my heart,
Sweet Dreams, which neither start to live,
Painful Dreams, which neither end to die.
~VJ
Finally!!!! :-)
(Well, technically this is not an Ode though.)
posted by Vijay Gandhi @ 9:46 pm
9 comments
9 Comments:
I am going to post that beautiful lady's picture in my blog. he he
Wow, that was a superb poem. Gandhi, very good imagination (or is it a reality?? ;-) ).
I liked the last 2 lines the most. Write more poems. Looks like the poetry talent has caught on you now. Does that indicate something else as well?
vj, u kept ur promise and in amazing style. i'm blown away.
anyway, who's the inspiration? C'mon u've to tell us atleast now.
VJ!! yet to find words to describe my appreciation...
First three stanzas completely pulled me in! Amazing imagination buddy...and what an ending!!!
This definitely cant be just-a-try stuff... c'mon, who's the Beautiful Lady???? ;-)
nothing serious guys, just thought abt a couple of ppl i know/used to know. and ofcourse, a lot of imagination!
Skely, i know what u mean. and u r not doing that!
DD, did u notice the constructive use of 'like' there! :-)
a couple of people??? Well, this seems to be headed in a different direction than what we thought earlier! so VJ, your list is expanding, huh?
Hey, Skely, we all are eager to see the lady described here... where is the foto?
Ya, I noticed something else as well! "Beautiful ... that she was" sounds so familiar to me, why? ;-)
a nice poem!..came here after DD's recommendation...sometimes, she exhibits some nice piece of brains!:P
sure krish, thsnks for dropping in!
Woow... thts some poem... Nice one!!
U r a good poet too... Cool...
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