Tuesday, October 18, 2005

Epilogue

Epilogue, to my other poem!
This is exactly what I have prepared for my mid-term exam today!!! :-)

Of a lady,
Of her talk,
Writing Poems,
Are my thoughts.

Of her beauty,
Of her care,
Of those moments,
Which we share.

Damn so crazy,
Have I gone,
Writing Poems,
All night long.

Asking questions,
Are my friends,
Who is the lady,
That gave you this bend.

Is this real?
Is this not?
Writing Poems,
Like never I thought.

Floating around,
Are words from heart,
What a lady!
What her talk!

Feels like some soul has gotten into me! :-)
At this rate, I am sure to have a long beard!!!

(Update: With refinements from DD)

12 Comments:

At October 18, 2005 9:37 pm, Blogger Skely said...

Holy Crap. Good one again...
Dude All the Best for your efforts...

I sense that you are to re-locate to South India very sooooooooooooooooooon.

 
At October 18, 2005 9:58 pm, Blogger DD said...

Hey Gandhi.. cool yar!
Just a suggestion... instead of
"Together we have" you may put "Which we share" (rhymes with care!!) :-)

long beard... hmmm! I doubt if you already have a one!! Still you havnt revealed the beauty in your dreams!!

 
At October 19, 2005 1:18 pm, Blogger Bijesh said...

maaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!! :-)

 
At October 19, 2005 1:29 pm, Blogger Anuradha Sridharan said...

Amazing, VJ. Hope that "lady" also reads ur masterpiece. Or should I fwd it to her? ;-)

 
At October 19, 2005 10:10 pm, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Nothing of that sort, guys.

Just that..somehow, I feel more happy here...

 
At October 20, 2005 1:24 pm, Blogger Anuradha Sridharan said...

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At October 20, 2005 1:30 pm, Blogger Anuradha Sridharan said...

Gandhi, Skely seems to be very happy here after knowing that you are happy in US. He is planning to travel to a tourist place somewhere near Bangalore this weekend and start a new phase in his life.

All the best Skely. Gandhi's wishes are with you.

PS : The above comment is not the actual one I intended to write. Skely had asked me to remove certain phrases from my earlier comment.

 
At October 20, 2005 3:06 pm, Blogger DD said...

So Gandhi, your feelings are running into words here! Ahmmmm!!!
What was that comment you have deleted in between? I missed out on that :-(

As Anu says, we will make sure *she* reads your masterpieces!! Just give us her contact :-D

 
At October 20, 2005 8:54 pm, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Skely, you don't have to go to any nearby tourist place for that. You have started a number of phases at Oracle. Continue with at least one of that! :-)

One more time - there is NOTHING going on...and, there is NOBODY at all...

 
At October 20, 2005 9:01 pm, Anonymous Anonymous said...

And Anu, definitely my wishes are not with Skely, in any case :-)

 
At October 22, 2005 12:44 am, Blogger abc said...

Oh dude , amazing ones..I never knew such a creative poet inside you..
I will seek your help when i need to write for someone ?

 
At October 22, 2005 2:55 am, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Sure Prof. Just remember to send the pic so that it would be easy for me to write more naturally! ;-)

 

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